In class, we
discussed Ted Kooser’s “Blind” poem, to better ourselves in analyzing poetry. I
found that I really liked the way that he styled his poems. They were simple
thoughts and words written in a pretty simple structure, but each different
aspect had a key place. I enjoyed that each word’s denotation would lead to
another words connotation or denotation. The web that it created was
fascinating to look at and connect to other pieces of the puzzle.
I was planning
on doing a more in depth read for my blog, but when I tried to find the poem “Blind”,
I could only find the poem that he wrote called “A Blind Woman”. I decided that
I was just going to look at it, and see if it was at least similar, and this is
when I decided that Ted Kooser is my favorite poet.
She had turned her face up into
a rain of light, and came on smiling.
a rain of light, and came on smiling.
The light trickled down her forehead
and into her eyes. It ran down
and into her eyes. It ran down
into the neck of her sweatshirt
and wet the white tops of her breasts.
and wet the white tops of her breasts.
Her brown shoes splashed on
into the light. The moment was like
into the light. The moment was like
a circus wagon rolling before her
through puddles of light, a cage on wheels,
through puddles of light, a cage on wheels,
and she walked fast behind it,
exuberant, curious, pushing her cane
exuberant, curious, pushing her cane
through the bars, poking and prodding,
while the world cowered back in a corner.
while the world cowered back in a corner.
I liked the imagery of the light that is
streaming in. When I think of light I think of the little rainbows that show up
and the happiness that it usually brings along. But the specific colors that
Kooser uses are white and brown. These colors are extremely muted, which was
ironic for a piece about being light and colorful. The other imagery that came
from the repetition of the word light was joyous happiness and even the curiosity
that follows a young girl. But then there is that repeated imagery that is somewhat
of a caged animal. The “cage of wheels” and how she is “pushing through the
bars” makes it seem like she is caged and only sees light on a small occasion.
This led me to think, is she literally caged
within a prison cell, or caged within her own body? She cannot see, which can
be told from the title (Blind), but that could mean that her eyes cannot see at
all, or that she is blind to the outside world that she is trying so hard to
get to. The bars could be that she cannot overcome the struggles that await
her.
It also makes me think that she is a sort of
animal that people want to see, but at the same time, want to keep their
distance from at the same time. The speaker talks about seeing the circus
wagons, but then she goes on to say “through the bars, poking and prodding,
while the world cowered back in a corner”. She’s the act that people hope to keep their distance from. But then that also lead me back to the question of what are they wanting to see from her. She might be blind to this as well. She might not see what they see.
while the world cowered back in a corner”. She’s the act that people hope to keep their distance from. But then that also lead me back to the question of what are they wanting to see from her. She might be blind to this as well. She might not see what they see.
This used to frustrate me about poetry that I could
never have a clear answer to a question that I had. The poet wasn’t right there
to explain the exact uses for the words that he had chosen. But this actually
interests me. I like to think of all the different questions and actually using
the text to support and disclaim the different theories that float through my
head. Poetry is interesting once you find a poet that writes in a style that
you prefer.
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