Just the Beginning to the start of great papers

I believed that I did very well on this essay. I put a lot of detail and thought into it and furthered the analysis more than I have ever done on any other essay written in this class. That showed in the grade and I am very happy with the grade that I received.

Every single essay though I struggle with organization. Although sometimes it is because of the small amount of time and I rush through the essay, this paper I had more time. I need to focus on gathering my thoughts and putting them coherently on the paper. Sometimes I put events in the wrong order as well when it should be in chronological order. Making sure that this organization is present in all of my essays will definitely help increase the average score because it will make it easier for the reader to move through the essay and also make comprehension easier.

I thought that I did a fairly good job at analyzing the characters. Every quotation that was inserted within the paper always had a detailed description of how it fit within the topic that I was discussing and also explained how I saw the character develop. Finding arguments for June was very difficult for me though. I knew what I wanted to say about her because of the things that I had picked up on throughout the course of the short story, but it was difficult for me to put the right quotations down without them being too long or too wordy. The mom I thought I did a better job with, but I still needed to think through the quotations to make sure that the reader understood what I was trying to portray the mother as. This also goes back to the organizational aspect of the paper. As soon as I start organizing my paper better and ensuring that all of my quotations and analysis flow together, this will help everything overall.

I did not talk about Arnold Friend a lot. And he is the one that references the old lady down the block. He was the first to kind of show the ageing process within the story. Although it was present with the first introductions of June and the mother, the old lady showed me the final pieces that helped me put everything together. I should have included Arnold Friend in more detail to discuss how he greatly impacted the short story and helped place all the pieces of the puzzle together.

I really liked my paragraph about the old lady though. I did that one first and im happy with all the quotations that I picked out. I thought I supported them well with analysis and then how it ended the paper with the thoughts that I wanted to put in the readers head.

I know that I still have a lot to work on, but I am very happy with the grade that I received on this paper and will focus on the things that Ms. Clinch pointed out to better my papers and ensure that I get an even higher grade on the next one.

Black, White, Gray

                Willie Stark is a character that is difficult to categorize. It is difficult to tell whether his intentions are for the best, or if they are only a means of gaining a higher political standing. The other characters and Willie himself seem to have a difficult time categorizing him as well.

            People including Hugh and Jack, who have gone with Willie through his change see the difference, but they still have a hard time characterizing him. Jack has been an associate/ therapist/ friend to Willie since the beginning and has seen him change into the governor. There is no question that a change has occurred, but the question is, is it for the better or worse for the society? Jack reminisces about the past, “back when the Boss had been Willie Stark (208). Jack believes that the change has been for the worst. He remembers the babbling man that stood in front of the crowd and read them statistics. The man that Willie is now goes around blackmailing people, and then using them when he finds the time that he needs them for. Jack sees all of this and knows that Willie is changing for the worst. Jack encourages this from the start though. He wanted Willie to go out there and make the people mad. Certain aspects of the way that Willie does business seems to have no effect on Jack. Even though he has been working with Willie the longest, he cannot characterize the man he has become. Hugh, the Attorney General, on the other hand, sees Willies change as becoming soft. Hugh claims that Willie treated Byram White “like he was human, and that [Willie] was saving Byram’s hide” (203). Willie is blackmailing Byram and making him sign his own resignation letter for when Willie needs it for his to discharge Byram. Although Willie threatens Byram, he never actually takes away his job, but gives him the impression that he could take it away any day that he wants to. Hugh is exaserapted at how Willie could be so soft to Byram, and treat him like an individual human being. This is the exact opposite of what is expected. Hugh sees Willie as becoming soft with power, whereas Jack see’s him becoming a monster that Willie was trying to avoid from the start. Both men have been working with Willie for a long period of time, and neither can determine the man that Willie is becoming.

            Willie also seems confused about the route he is taking. Willie used to be considered a sap that had no idea about the running of politics, and was completely naïve to the concept of blackmailing people. He claimed that he did not want to turn out like Dr. Pillsbury and the sheriff, whom he used to oppose greatly. Now he is running the town the same way that they did; through fear tactics and other types of black mail. As soon as Willie was done blackmailing Byram, he claimed that he was going to build “a big, chromium-plated, formaldehyde-stinking free hospital” (209). Willie subconsciously understands that the way that he is running the government and the people is wrong, and tries to make up for it in many different ways, but it does not account for the fact that he is still black mailing people. Willie is his own self and he still appears to not understand his own motives and ways of business. Willie is also always described as wearing all different sorts of gray’s in all of his clothing. This gray characterizes how nothing is in black and white. Willie does not truly understand what is going on and who he is becoming and that is why he is constantly in the gray and why others always see him there. His material things such as a car (which is black) and house (white) appear to be things that he truly understands.

            Throughout the novel, it is not clearly understood what side of politics that Willie presents. Warren could be trying to depict how this is true of real life politics. Everyone is trying to achieve greatness through honesty, but that is not possible and they must resort to the dishonest side of politics.  

Underlying Power

Willie Stark is a man that is portrayed in the beginning of the novel as having the most power. He dominates the town, and every citizen and follower of his listens intently to the speeches that he gives and every word that he speaks. Although Willie seems to be this dominating force that makes his own ideas and theories, he seems easily influenced by the important people surrounding him, and also in certain situations, he seems to have no control. Although these individuals are portrayed as being followers of Willie and beneath him; they are the ones influencing him and the ones showing more dominance.

            The first indicator of the underlying characters influencing Willie is his wife Lucy. Although Lucy is a woman, who in this timeframe has limited rights and powers, she encourages Willie to follow her own ideals. She “don’t much favor drinking” (26), and although she doesn’t push Willie to follow this, Willie does. Willie is meeting with Tiny and Jack in Slade’s bar, and even though they are all drinking beers, Willie will not because Lucy does not like it. Although Lucy is not there at that moment, he still follows her lead, even though she is a woman. Willie is also described as a “teacher’s pet” (21), while Lucy is the “school-teacher” (21). A teacher’s pet follows every rule and procedure that the teacher tells them. The boys were all giving Willie a tough time during this section of the novel because Lucy is the woman that is bossing Willie, when it should be the other way around. Even though Lucy is portrayed as a docile individual who is a doting wife, who follows her husband’s lead; she is secretly the woman who is running the show.

            Jack is another individual that influences Willie Stark. Jack Burden is Willie’s right hand man; a man that is supposed to help him make decisions, but not the one that actually makes the final decision. Jack tells Willie to follow the strategy of “making them mad. Even if they were made at [him].” (108). Willie had been going through the political process with the mind frame that the people wanted statistics and facts. He had been sprouting these around during his speeches and didn’t understand why the people did not enjoy his speeches. Jack was the first to tell Willie to change his strategy, and become more human and less mechanical during these. Willie listened and started doing as Jack said, and as soon as he started listening to Jack, he started becoming, little by little more popular in the votes. Willie is supposed to be the leader and make the final decisions once he’s heard others point of views; but instead he just listens to them and does not make a decision of his own.

            Willie is portrayed as a character with the most political power, and as being a “big man”. But without his main group of followers, including his wife and Jack, he would not be as powerful as he is in the town. Willie cannot make decisions for himself, and as soon as he was assisted, he became a more dominant leader. Willie went from “a sap” (112), to a political dominator who the entire town followed, and merely because of his underlying friends and influencers, who helped him achieve his success.

Beauty and the Beast

We looked at Cinderella in all the different lens theories. I decided to look at another Disney movie, Beauty and the Beast, and see if there was a common theme, if it was viewed through the Marxist lens.

The quick role changes from oppressor to victim was one aspect that stood out the most in the movie. In the beginning, the prince was the oppressor, who viewed very individual as ranking below him. When the beggar woman came, he saw her and decided that he did not need to offer his help. He quickly changed from the oppressor to the victim though when he was changed into the beast. The old beggar woman changed from a needy homeless woman, to a strong enchantress. Later on in the story as well, the Beast took Belle hostage. As a hostage she was forced to wear a certain dress and forced to come down to dinner, Belle was clearly the victim, while the Beast dictated her. Belle soon took control though and did not fear the Beast when he yelled, and continuously yelled back. Although she was still considered a hostage, she was conversing and acting like she was an equal.

The difference between Belle and Cinderella though was their economic status. Cinderella was very pretty and came from a rich family, although she was treated poorly. Although Belle was good looking, she came from a middle to lower class family. Cinderella was able to move through the upper ranks to get to the prince because of her social standings and because of her looks. If she had not been a part of the upper class, her and her family would not have been invited to the ball. Belle did not have to move through the upper ranks to marry her prince. If she had been upper class, she would have travelled on a better road in better transportation and would not have been in the situation that Belle was in. Because of her lower rank, she was able to meet the Beast and fall in love.

Material items were also not as prevalent in Beauty and the Beast, as they were in Cinderella. Gowns and carriages and other wealthy material items, were very important to Cinderella in achieving her status. Without these things, she would not have been “good enough” to go to the ball. Everything that was described in the story Cinderella was very lavish and decorated, and that did not appear in Beauty and the Beast. The setting was in a dreary castle with a mangy beast. The first recollection of material goods is at the end of the movie when they are dancing in the ballroom, in their formal dress.

Although Cinderella and Belle have many similarities throughout the simple watching of the movie, they are very different in the Marxism lens. Where Cinderella focuses on moving up in her status, Belle is comfortable in her status. Cinderella focuses heavily on lush material objects to gain her prince, while Belle focuses on getting out of the castle. The switching of roles can be seen in both stories though. The Beast and Belles change of roles can be related to how Cinderella became a princess. Cinderella used to be the victim of her sisters, but as soon as she became a person of power, they bowed down to her, and she became the oppressor (although Cinderella did not use this power to gain revenge). Cinderella and Beauty and the Beast, although written for similar purposes, are very different in the Marxist lens.  

Loneliness in a Croweded Town

In class discussions, almost all of the stories have been discussed, except for the story of “Loneliness”. I thought that it was very interesting that this story was never discussed in great detail during the discussions, but I can see why. The story itself seems to have no real connection to the rest of the story as a whole at first, and also the main character, George Willard, is only mentioned one time. But the story of “Loneliness” shows the resounding themes that everyone in the story relates to, being lonely and finding a place for themselves. It also helps show how key George is to the other characters in the story, and how he helps them and learns to understand them all.

Enoch, like the rest of the characters in the story, feels this lonely sense of not belonging, although he tries to acknowledge societies expectation of him, he cannot grasp the norms. He was very proud of himself when he “became a citizen of the world”, which is when he listened to society. Enoch voted, married, had children, and read the newspaper on his front porch, but this was not the life that he expected for himself. He became bored and claustrophobic with this life that he had created for himself, so he quite it. Many other characters were not satisfied with the lives that they had chosen for themselves, including Elizabeth, who married but not for love and Alice, who was continuously waiting for a man to show up, but never did. What is different is that he had the love that he thought he wanted, but in the end tossed it away. Many characters spend their entire lives waiting for their spouse, and he found one and just left her.

Enoch follows his own path for fitting into society though and makes up his imaginary friends. Society did not give him a proper group to fit into so he made his own. He dreamed, and the result was a group of close, but imaginary friends. He tries to take his fantasy world and bring it into the real world when he tells his next door neighbor, but as soon as he professes his dreams to her, his friends vanish. This contradicts what is stated about dreams in the rest of the story though. Dreams should be kept and followed through. As soon as he spreads his dream and tells another person, they vanish and he never sees his “friends” again. Dreams do not exist in the real world of Enoch.  

            Enoch also had dreams about his future, like many other characters within the story, but they were quickly crushed by life. Enoch wanted to go to Paris to become an artist, but this did not turn out well and that is why he moved to Winesburg. Although he was a very good artist, this dream was crushed. Elizabeth did not want the same thing happening to George and that is why she wanted him to keep dreaming. Wing also encouraged George to keep dreaming, although they could be quickly crushed.

            Enoch also goes to talk about these occurrences with George. George is a young boy, who everyone is trying to save from becoming a grotesque. Enoch can be characterized as one of the loneliest people in this story, and by telling George his story; he can try and prevent George from becoming like him. He does not want George to become as lonely and as desperate for a place to fit in as he is.

            Loneliness is a very important story and shows how lonely almost all the characters are in one single and unified character. Every character has their own reason for being lonely, but when Enoch tries to bring his fantasies into the real world, that is when he becomes completely alone.